Showing posts with label Published Work. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Published Work. Show all posts

Sunday, December 25, 2011

"Ancient Tales, Modern Legends" Published


I guess when you write and have been doing so for so long, it becomes part of your genetic makeup. Until 2007, this blog was fairly well read, actually more than "fairly" and enjoyed quite a following. But around that time, as my last post explained some 3 years ago, I moved towards Virtual World Technologies. Time goes on. You follow the path that either you create or leads you.

During this time the Digital World of print exploded. I stood on the sidelines, reading, researching and listening. I was never skeptical about it. I know that children growing up today for the most part, will lose that wonderful feeling of turning the pages of a real book. Yet, this too has its positive side, in that so much more information becomes available to the person when they are working on a digital format.

Yet, I was a bit wary of jumping into the "find the agent -- get the publisher" fray again. Having been burned so many times it is difficult to be positive about such things. Then a couple of months ago, one of my short stories, through my agent was bought and published by Istoria Books for publication in ebook format. They put "A Pot Of Gold" in their Lunch Books Series Volume 4 and once again I started paying attention to the digital world. You can see it here:  http://www.amazon.com/dp/B005EYTDU0 

Which of course got me thinking. Which of course caused a small coal still burning deep inside to write and write to flare up. And as time went on that flare became a small fire. Friends, family and colleagues gently nudged me to enter the world of ebook publishing. I put it aside for as long as I could ignore those inner voices. Then one day I said to myself, "let me just see how difficult or easy this is to do".

For someone used to technology I found Amazon's KDP very intriguing. It had a lot of positive sides, and I felt that it would be a good starting point. So I read their documents (more on those in a later post as their documentation is not complete), but I jumped in. I decided the time had come to enter this world. Too much was languishing on my hard drive. Too many years of writing and writing and writing, were sitting there, with no place to go. Maybe it was all just plain horrible. Maybe it was good. Maybe it was mediocre. And maybe it was excellent. There was no way for me to really know.

I would never have taken this leap if it was the old scam of charging the author to read their work. But this was Amazon and could be trusted and it is totally free. I found all the right reasons in the right environment to go ahead. Yet still, as many of you will say, what if you wait for that agent and the publishing contract? It was and still is a question that each person must answer for themselves. I assumed it would not happen. Manuscripts mailed out languish or are never read on some desk of a publisher or agent. Rejection letters pile up. It wears you down. And even if you do have an agent, that is just part of the battle.

The digital world allows us to a great deal that would have to have been done by professionals just ten years ago. Not only the actual creation of the book, but promotion, marketing, public relations can all be done if you do know how to use and manipulate the electronic byways in the correct way. Of course, the real thing is to write, not to spend time on Facebook, Twitter, Linked-In and using programs to create ebooks. However, as I realized in the old cliche - you just have to start somewhere.

I knew I would return to "Cobwebs Of The Mind". I actually enjoyed writing this blog. It was fun. People read it. They sent in letters asking why I had stopped. Actually, I had all the puzzle pieces. The question was did I have the strength once again to put them together and implement them correctly.

So I took my collection of short stories, "Ancient Tales, Modern Legends", sans "A Pot Of Gold", as it had just been published, went over it and began the process. To be honest once your book is ready and you know what you are doing, this process should take more than a couple of hours from beginning to end - the end being it is up on Amazon or Smashwords or Google Books. IPad is a different animal but then again you can use Smashwords for it. Running ahead of ourselves at the moment. I took a week, which was mostly an inner psychological fight, "why do it?".

Today the short story collection "Ancient Tales, Modern Legends" is up on Amazon. If anything, I enjoyed the actual process. Yet, as anyone who has been through it will tell you, once you start, there is a great deal more work all the time. For now, I will apply the social networking skills to try and move the book in the Kindle format.

In the next few posts I will share the process with you so that we can combine writing with the necessary and required skills of technology.

If you can afford to, and desire it, get the Kindle version of "Ancient Tales, Modern Legends". I think you will enjoy the read with 12 short stories, in approx. 320 pages (in Kindle format there really are no pages). Please also, pass this information on to others, and if you do leap in and buy it, leave a review. (I think you are required to wait 48 hours after purchase to post a review.)




Well I guess this means Cobwebs of the Mind is back. Not such a bad thing. Not such a bad thing at all. :)

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Thursday, April 12, 2007

Who Will Die Tomorrow?

This month at The Deepening a different sort of piece was published, under the category of "True Life". Who Will Die Tomorrow? is actually a chapter from the book "Three Weeks In Jenin". Below is from the introduction to the piece which also appears up at The Deepening.

When the second Intifada (means “uprising”) rained down upon Israel in the year 2000, a long protracted terrorist war broke out where hundreds of innocent civilians were murdered, coming to its end when Israel finally invaded many Palestinian towns and villages in Operation Defensive Shield during the last days of March 2002. Our unit, in which I have served as a battlefield medic for over 20 years was called up immediately. Due to our expertise in warfare within towns and cities, where trained, armored foot soldiers must do most of the fighting, we were sent to Jenin.

Jenin had and still has the reputation, rightfully earned, as being the seat of terrorist activity. We were there for three weeks, from the beginning to the end. Afterwards, with a literary agent, I managed to interest a major publishing house and great editor in the story of Jenin. For whatever reasons, the book “Three Weeks In Jenin” was canceled.

The following is a chapter from the beginning of the book Three Weeks In Jenin. It tells of an event that took place three weeks or so before my call up and entry into town.

What is this city-village named Jenin? Perhaps below will explain it best.

In a landscape that could one day contain sparkling streams careening down small waterfalls into dark brown woods and flourishing green fields — in the midst of this beauty — lies a small city named Jenin. It is a place where one can experience the sweet smell of fresh blood mixed with that acrid odor of numbing fear, the sound of bombs exploding and guns firing, the sight of gaping wounds and mangled limbs, the touch of cold steel allowing less than a second of thought between killing or being killed, and the bitter taste of bile in the mouth. …Three weeks in the biblical village of Ein-Gannim, known currently as Jenin — a personal Armageddon encountered within a city where hate runs rampant even as the greatness of God is declared while in His name death is dispensed with a serene smile.

The first part of Who Will Die Tomorrow? (a real short piece actually) is below. You can read the rest up at The Deepening.

It always seems to begin with a phone call in the middle of the night. Possibly within the scheme of things, the divine scheme, if there is such a notion, no hour or minute takes preference over the other. Yet vindictive fate is jealous of those peaceful hours during sleep’s forgetfulness, and, with calculated spite, destroys our stolen tranquility.

That night, actually early morning, of March 8th, more than three weeks before Jenin would enter into the scheme of things, I fell asleep on the couch. On those nights when the body refuses to find sleep’s pleasure in bed and its magic lure fills me with fear, I gravitate to that couch. Some may call it an inner voice, or a message that the soul receives, but that the brain refuses to recognize. Still, when the couch beckons, and the body acquiesces to that call by falling into a deep, troubled sleep, an inner ear is always listening for soft, ghostly footfalls during dream’s pandemonium.

A ring of the cell phone at two AM. Instantly and completely awake, adrenalin surging, blood pumping wildly its echo in my inner ear…. With three rings to answer before voice-messaging takes control, the “Hello” comes out at the end of the second.

“Ted?”

It is Debbie, my ex-wife. You don’t live with a woman for twenty-two years without learning the nuance’s in her voice. “What happened?” I ask, realizing how stupid this sounds. Of course something has happened.

“Did you hear about the terrorist attack?”

Debbie knows I don’t react well to surprises, good or bad. Her voice, that tone, tells me she does not have time. Yet she is trying her best to not just come out with it, giving the chance for me to acclimate and my brain to react without immobilizing panic.

We have had seven children together. Six are still alive. Having shared that roller coaster ride to hell and back, both together and separately, I immediately wonder if six has just become five — morbid thoughts always ready for that ‘something else’ to happen. Always expecting it. “What attack?”

“In Atzmona,” Debbie answers, and then stops waiting for it to sink in. The brain does a quick check. Six kids, but none even near Atzmona. The two little ones are sleeping upstairs. What the hell is this about?

Debbie knows I have not made the connection. So she rushes on, no time left.

“Eli is still alive, but hurt. Don’t know how badly. I am going to get Shalhevet, and then drive down to Ashkelon where they took him to the hospital. Will call you as soon as I know something.”

I stare at the dead phone. Trying to catch up. Shalhevet whose name means in Hebrew, “flame”, is our eighteen-year-old daughter whom I call “bubela” which loosely means ‘doll’. Eli is Shalhevet’s boyfriend. They are childhood sweethearts and have been in love forever and ever it seems. …Says it all as far as I am concerned.
This is all part of a true story which details the events that lead up to and encompass Operation Defensive Shield from 2002, and subsequently the war during three weeks in Jenin where I was a medic.

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Sunday, February 04, 2007

Love In A Cafe

Since I have been really busy the posts in Cobwebs Of The Mind went to nil again. My apologies. Writing, family, work and life intruded in December but I really do hope things are back to semi-normal. Plus the nomination of my other blog, Help! I Have A Fire In My Kitchen, in the Seventh Annual Weblog Awards (Bloggies) as one of the 5 finalists for the best food weblog - kind of kept me busy. Well voting is over over at the bloggies, and I want to thank everyone who took the time to vote for Help! I Have A Fire In My Kitchen.

You all know how I love posters, especially the posters from Despair.com which I use in my Writer Despair Series. Well, I have come across some really great posters for writing as well. (If you wish to purchase it or view other posters just click below on the picture or on the link below it.) From time to time I will post them here on in the sidebar.

The poster below, especially Rule #8 was something that played into my life recently.

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Another story of mine, entitled, "Love In A Cafe" was just released over at The Deepening. After I wrote this story for one of the few times I actually allowed a few people to read it. I was amazed at most of the reactions. You see I set about to actually write a "fun" story and that is how "Love In A Cafe" came about. At the time I wrote it I was just not in the "head mood" for some deep story with deep meaning. Nor did I want to try and get a "point" across. I just wanted to let the reader enjoy, of course there is a twist in the story, but nevertheless enjoy. I had a great time writing it.

But the reactions of my pre-readers before it was published astounded me, especially since some of them were kind of vehement. "Where is your passion and pathos that is in all the other stories?" "Where is the message?" some of them wrote back.

Upon expressing my thoughts that I just wanted to produce an "enjoyable" read, some of these readers told me that before they read my stories, they take a deep breath and get ready for a "wild ride on a roller coaster of emotions". One actually fairly famous author, whom I am friends with, wrote back (posted with her permission):
"Your stories are usually so painful to read at times, that I must put aside an hour or two because I know you are going to hit me with a hammer. This one I laughed with though the point and message of it are subtle. Knowing your other work I will admit I was disappointed because now I have to wait for the next one to have a good cry! Though Love In A Cafe is well done. I liked it because it is real and true."
Some people liked it a great deal. "Love In A Cafe" is a story with a twist, and enjoyable to read (I hope). The message is subtle though poignant.

The editors over at The Deepening had this to say:
"For a shy man, speaking to a woman is impossible. Until the impossible happens…or will it?

Editor’s Note: Be patient and read. Savor and experience. It bites...nicely, with keen edge and exquisite poignancy."
Take a look at "Love In A Cafe" and let me know if you enjoyed.

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Saturday, December 02, 2006

Short Story "Kapparot" Published At The Deepening

A new short story "Kapparot" has been published over at The Deepening.
Editor’s Note: Of all of Ted's work we've published thus far, I think this one is the most entertaining, the most “fun.” I've been harboring it in safe holding for this, our Holiday issue, because it certainly is a rich delight. Thank you, Ted. Magnificent, once again. —zentao
If you have a membership you can go directly to read it here. Kapparot

Other short stories published:

The Sunflower

The Heretic

Tenuous Webs

A Pot Of Gold

Reverieing

A Tapestry Of War

Addiction, Obsession, Love

Kapparot


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Tuesday, November 14, 2006

The Deepening's New Blog - A Well Kept Secret

Anyone who reads Cobwebs Of The Mind even on semi-regular basis knows that I have had some short stories published over at The Deepening, ("TD" for short), a short story magazine web site. Yesterday while peeking at my Technorati links from other blogs I found a new link coming in from a blog at The Deepening. This Blog, run by the owner and editors of TD, can be found at The Deepening Blog Sphere.

This is definitely a well-kept secret as there seems to be no link up on the Deepening web site from which you can access The Deepening Blog Sphere. I strongly suggest this is done forthwith, as authors and others always find the possibility of communicating with editors, agents and publishers through comments a welcome experience.

I mention this to the readers of Cobwebs Of The Mind for a few reasons. The first is that some of the entries there, especially Great Authors vs. Bad Actors should really be read by all. Yet again another posting by a publisher that reminds one of the Rejecter's comment here, which precipitated my posting: A Very Valid Response From The Rejecter. This validates (though it did not need validating that such practices by frustrated idiots are not as uncommon as we would like to think.

I also think that if you want to add to your staple of possible publishing sites, The Deepening, is a legitimate way to go as well. If you are trying to break in with short stories and need a good place in a really small "arena" of legitimate places to submit your short story, try TD. Take a look at the blog, The Deepening Blog, and web site, The Deepening, to see if you it matches your needs.

Yes, I have a soft spot for TD as they have published some of my stories. However, it is a legitimate site with fairly good editorial feedback as well. Of course if your eyes are only on The New Yorker and Atlantic Monthly, then as I always say, go for it. Unfortunately we cannot all get published in such prestigious magazines, and though it is great to strive for, TD will give you an open venue and readers (if they accept your short that is!)

So along with those SASE's packed and shipped to The New Yorker, Harper's, Atlantic Monthly and Paris Review - if you want to get a short story out there, TD is well worth the effort at looking at and making the attempt.

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Thursday, November 09, 2006

The BIG DEEP BLACK HOLE of Queries

I always bitch about how much I hate query letters. I hate them. They give me hives. I need Valium and Advil together to write them. And it never fails, that after I send them out, the next day I realize they could have been done so much better. I hate query letters!

You send queries out either in snail mail or email, and they all get together and make a plan. First of all, start off with the assumption that they hate you for making them do any work. Second of all know that query letters always have this conspiracy. You send them out, you wait for an answer, and suddenly, in a five minute period, they all arrive back in your email (or on the same freaking day in snail mail) with all the same answers. "Sorry but ..." And you know deep inside that answer KNOWING that your query letter did all it could to give you an ulcer.

What is worse, when you finally get an answer from the agent, that is positive, oy vey, you have to start the partial to full process. And you know you just know, something is gonna happen. You are going to run out of toner, you are going to put the wrong font in, your paragraphs are gonna go on holiday and strike.

AND THEN finally when you do get that partial out or the full...the next morning you reread it (NEVER DO THAT!!!!!) and you discover OMG two spelling mistakes which that dumb arse Word didn't tell you about, and you want to edit like 10 chapters!!!!!

I HATE QUERY LETTERS. THEY CONSPIRE AGAINST ME.

So today while doing some rare clean up work....I found a copy (that Pop had saved cause he was gonna brain me for doing this), of my application essay to a very prestigious Ivy-League University.

In it they said three things make up your acceptance or rejection: (there is that word again - "rejection")
1. Your HS marks
2. Your Interview
3. Your essay on the application
That essay was MY FIRST QUERY Letter!

So in it they ask in 500 words or less to tell them all about my history until that point, my desires, my dreams and what I wanted to get out of U.

So smart-ass me, writes an essay on how it is ludicrous to ask someone to write an essay in less than 500 words about all that. And I did it in 350+! (True Story btw....I reread that essay just now and I gave myself 10 gold stars!!!)

That was my essay. I got the interview, and I got accepted though I did not go.

So that is my query letter lesson of the day
My next query is going to read:

Dear Agent:

If you think I can put down and describe in 50 words or less this incredible literary piece that will change the world, you are as crazy as I think you are. So instead I will allow my query to conspire against me and make sure I spelled your name wrong, the agency name wrong, and everything else being even, I expect to hear from you in around 3 weeks, cause your servers went down and my query letter hopped around the globe from email to email box for around a week.

Of course, the 50 queries I sent out today will also arrive all on the same day with 10 minutes of each other. Since I expect 49 acceptances (hey there is always one agent who can't read!) do not waste a moment in saying Yes. Otherwise I will just have to put your desire to read my masterful piece of work in line behind the others.

Just send your acceptance to my email (correct) address. My query will always return from the black hole whence it took vacation.

Sincerely,

Ted William Gross

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Monday, November 06, 2006

Addiction, Obsession, Love - Short Story

Hey All

Just posting that my new story "Addiction, Obsession, Love" is out on TD in the November Issue.

Main Page of TD is at www.thedeepening.com

November Issue can be found here

Story for those of you who are members is at:
Addiction, Obsession, Love

Of Course since I am such a braggart here is what the editor wrote about the story as its teaser - and yes, I am comma challenged. Sheesh!

(And before anyone starts getting obnoxious - yes I am aware that the teaser is not totally correct in its grammatical sense.)

Addiction, Obsession, Love by Ted William Gross

The power and poignancy of real love, can we survive its aching, turbulent reckoning upon our very soul and essence? (Literary)

Editor’s Note:

This is probably one of the most difficult pieces I’ve ever had to edit, and, if my editing lacks aplomb, for I know I have not done this story it’s true justice, I apologise. This story ached in me as I read it, then ached even harder as I tried vainly to seek out comma splices and faults, to take that which was written with such exquisite passion and honestly and bring it to some grammatical cohesion that would render it whole and globally comprehensible in its entirely to its any audience.

Some could say this is a story of closure. …But it’s not; Some would say this is a tale of errant love. Again, it’s not; This is empassioned, a real story of real love, a perspective rarely glimpsed, more rarely comprehended, and most rarely ever expressed, especially from the man’s point of view. To have this most sought for, most elusive, most evasive of all experiences brought forth in full, real, raw, unfettered expression in a modern tale of joy and sorrow, of real feeling evoking real, demonstrated interplay of passion, understanding, and melancholy, is, once more, the gift Ted William Gross brings to the world with his powerful honesty in integrity of vision. —zentao
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(You got to love it when I brag! )

This is the seventh short story published this year:

The Sunflower

The Heretic

Tenuous Webs

A Pot Of Gold

Reverieing

A Tapestry Of War

Addiction, Obsession, Love


Tuesday, October 03, 2006

A Tapestry Of War

A new short story based upon the recent war Israel-Lebanon has been published over at thedeepening.com.


You can read A Tapestry Of War here in the October Edition of The Deepening.


Since Jan. 2006, six of my stories have been published at thedeepening.com. Normally I just post the fact that the stories are up, and I tend to shy away from the editor or reader comments to the stories. Well since thank goodness things are kind of heating up in "possibilities" I will quote one of the editors on my last story that went up at thedeepening.com. You can read this comment and the story in the full by accessing it here. This is just one of the comments I have received about my writing.


"EDITOR'S NOTE: Ted William Gross has to be one of the preeminent literary writers of this new century. There isn't a word in his letters to me, a moment in his work, that I don't sit stunned, in awestruck admiration…for the man, for his perspectives, for his literature.  —zentao"






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Tuesday, July 11, 2006

Reverieing, The Heretic, A Pot Of Gold, Tenuous Webs, The Suflower - Short Stories

I want to thank everyone for the kind emails of congratulations that I receieved when they read the stories at thedeepening.com.
I certainly do not feel worthy of a lot of the compliments and statements made about my writing, but it certainly is gratifying to hear.


Since Jan. 2006, five of my stories have been published at thedeepening.com. Normally I just post the fact that the stories are up, and I tend to shy away from the editor or reader comments to the stories. Well since thank goodness things are kind of heating up in "possibilities" I will quote one of the editors on my last story that went up at thedeepening.com. You can read this comment and the story in the full by accessing it here. This is just one of the comments I have received about my writing.


"EDITOR'S NOTE: Ted William Gross has to be one of the preeminent literary writers of this new century. There isn't a word in his letters to me, a moment in his work, that I don't sit stunned, in awestruck admiration…for the man, for his perspectives, for his literature.  —zentao"


You can read some other comments by readers here, along with my bio.


Thanks everyone once again for your private emails.




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Tuesday, July 04, 2006

Reverieing - Fifth Story Published at thedeepening

Well, "Reverieing" was just published up at thedeepening.com. This my fifth short story published this year in this magazine. I know the title is not a real word...sheesh... For short story fans who are interested in real and serious short story fiction covering many topics and genre's I would suggest a trip over to thedeepening.com. It is well worth it..especially since my stories are there too! Tags: , , ,

Tuesday, June 27, 2006

Getting Wasted - Writing & Publishing Short Stories

Writing Muse - Cobwebs Of The MindFor a moment in time, I am going to interrupt my series on Blogging, and go back to my original love in life, writing. Posts on writing make up quite a few posts at Cobwebs Of The Mind and it is also for that reason that I started this blog. I am one of those writers who has tasted the sweet nectar of publication a few times, and yet, seeks a great deal more.  The reasons I write are varied. Yet today I truly write because it is a love of the craft and a desire to move people, make them think, make them feel, that motivates me. The following appears on my web site about writing, but I will also put it here.


"In my younger days I wrote because I thought I had something to say and wanted to be rich and famous, (I kid you not.)
Then I wanted to touch people, move them, see them cry or smile or argue over my words.
When my second children's book was published, oh so many years ago, and I was walking down a street and saw it in the window of a bookstore in Jerusalem (imported all the way from the USA), I decided I wrote because of the feeling it gave me at that moment.
As the years went by, I abandoned the rich and famous desire, and I realized that to touch people you had to be real - first and foremost to yourself - and I understood that the feeling of seeing your book in the window of a bookstore or listed at Amazon, while incredible, does not last.
I realized that all the above were excuses. Simply put, I write for me. To bring out the raw, the untouched, the hidden emotion and the passion. To let that voice express itself, first and foremost to my own conscious mind. I write to let the story out so I can read it for myself.
And when I do that, I know I will touch others. I know the book will always be in the window of my mind and that too is an exhilarating experience. And though I have no clue if I will ever be famous or rich, I do know I have made my own world richer, and I know myself that much better."



One of the areas of writing which is probably the most difficult to break into is the short-story genre. I do realize that many individuals have actually broken into full-blown writing careers after having a short story or stories published. I began writing short stories many years ago, (too many to count), and had very little luck with placing them. The two literary agents I have had during these years, have for whatever reasons, ignored the short stories as a "stand-alone" part of my writing career. Without a literary agent it makes the job of submission and acceptance so much harder. Of course this could all be due to the fact that my short stories just don't stand up to par and just don't "make the cut", as it were. That I accepted as the reason and truth behind not being able to sell a short story for many years. However the short stories that I did write and continue to write over the years, traveled with me, from place to place and computer and computer. I never totally wiped them off the disk, nor did I stop writing them. Every now and again I would put pen to paper and somehow the story would start to flow and the words would come out.


As I have already written elsewhere, my short story collection grew and soon without any conscious decision I was calling this collection by the name"Ancient Tales, Modern Legends". It was a way of making these "stories" real to me. A way of making sure I did not loose that last vestige of hope, that all writers have, worthy or not, that their work or works will someday see publication.


This past year, through a series of totally unrelated incidents in the "virtual world" of the Internet, I landed at a newly developing Web Publication Site for short stories, called thedeepening.com. Four editors had just embarked upon a new venture, not an ezine, not a fly by night venture, but a legitimate venture with ISSN registration, to publish short stories. Upon reading their demands for publication, I sighed softly to myself, and knew that they would never pick anything I wrote to publish in thedeepeing.com. The funny thing was, I had not thought for a very long time about getting these stories published. They had been placed on the back-burner. However, a few days before landing at the home page of thedeepening.com, I was asked by a publisher who was discussing a possible work, for what I thought to be my best short story or chapter. A former agent of mine had once expressed the opinion that she thought "The Sunflower" was nearly my best piece (I do not agree by the way) and that is what I sent to this publisher.


I almost navigated away from thedeepening.com. But then I realized that was being silly. I had these stories sitting on my hard disk and in my head, and at this point they were not doing anyone any good, so why not at least try? It took me 15 minutes to pull "The Sunflower" up and reformat it according to guidelines and submit it. It was accepted that very day, and the rest is history.


 thedeepening.com has accepted five of my short stories so far and rejected one, (which I was pretty sure they would reject but I am sticking to my stubborn guns on that story.) I have had the pleasure of exchanging quite a few emails with some of the editors, and their comments which are usually great for my ego, have made me more aware once again of the short story genre. Though I  cannot say, in all honesty, that I have had any agent or publisher banging down my doors as a result. Which brings me to the last story accepted and to be published at thedeepening.com in July, entitled "Reverieing". (No that is not a spelling mistake!)


"Reverieing" is a new story, not one pulled out of the hard disk after years of dormancy. It is a story that for many reasons "wasted me" while writing it, trying to keep myself from becoming too closely entangled with my protagonist. Yesterday I received the electronic galleys of the story, and  I had to go over them for possible mistakes etc. And so I had to read what I wrote yet again, something I do not like doing, once a story is finished. And again the story wasted me. Left me numb. Left me with a feeling of total abandonment.


And I asked myself. Is  a short story that I wrote supposed to leave me like that? Should I not be removed from the venture? Should I not be looking upon it with an objective, non-caring eye? I know not that answer to those questions. I know that Reverieing came from a place deep within me that we all must find from time to time no matter how painful it is and no matter where the road of discovery will eventually lead to.


Yes, I wish I could sell these stories and more, my collection called "Ancient Tales, Modern Legends" to a publisher and of course get an agent who really can make the deals happen. Yes I wish I could use that a springboard into a full time writing career. And yes, I still dream of those possibilities. For now though, I find that after years on the shelf, my short stories are sold and are actually being read. That is a trip for me, no doubt about it. Maybe somewhere in the future, I may get the luck again, and have the right agent land on thedeepening.com and read some of the stories I wrote and be interested enough to take me on as a client. And until that time, I rest with the knowledge that at least some of the subscribers to  thedeepening.com have read, felt and enjoyed some of my writing.




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Sunday, June 18, 2006

On Writing Short Stories

To my mind the writing of a short story is one of the most difficult things a writer has to face, if short stories are part of his genre repertoire. Whether you want to tell a legend, a tale, get a point across, or just allow your reader a glimpse into your characters lives and/or mind, when you are limited to a specific amount of words, you must choose each word with exceptional care.

Many people, those uninitiated into the world of writing, think that due to the fact a short story by nature is "short" (e.g. not a full blown novel), it should be easier to think of, create, write and edit. The reality, at least for me is exactly the opposite. The short story is the most difficult to genre to write and more importantly to write well for.


I have always loved the art of putting together a short story. To be sure as the author you must decide, how much "tell" and how much character participation will take place. The cardinal rule that is drilled into the writer's head of "show don't tell" - meaning don't tell the reader in narrative what will or is happening, have your characters do it - often does not apply in specific short stories. (Indeed I think that rule is bull anyway, as it has nothing to do with "show" or "tell" but how good the author is in his craft.)


Since most of my short stories would fall under the "literary" genre it becomes more difficult at times to make sure that within a specific amount of words I can get the point or tale I am telling through to the reader.


Some short stories of mine, recently published appear at thedeepening a bona-fide ISSN number and recognized short story site on the net. I will probably devote a whole post to the folks and ideas going on at thedeepening but for now suffice it to say that four or my stories are up there, and the fifth will be published in July.


What I have learned from this venture with thedeepening is that a well-written short story, may not find its market today or tomorrow, and may find it only 25 years in the future, but IT WILL FIND ITS MARKET!


The deepening has the following stories:



  1. The Sunflower

  2. A Pot Of Gold

  3. Tenuous Webs

  4. The Heretic

  5. Reverieing (to be published in July)


For those of you not willing to pay to read literature from some top authors in their field, each month a story is picked that can be read for free by anyone. The Sunflower is one of those stories, so you can mosey over thedeepening and read that one along with some fine stories from other authors as well. You can read my bio, leave a notation about how you like or disliked the stories, and see just how professional writing is shaping up these days as well.


The art of writing a short story, takes patience a willingness to edit, sometimes even wiping out your favorite lines. My advice to all writers that ask me is this.


On your first writing, write with your heart. Leave your head on vacation. Once you have the raw material down on paper, write or edit with your head and leave your heart at home. Let your head be without any compassion or empathy to what your heart wrote. Let it X and cut out. The final draft combine those two, use your head and your heart. In the end you will have a polished story, which leaves the reader with the raw emotion, but packaged in a well-written prose or story.


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Tuesday, June 13, 2006

Children's Books - Of Rabbit's Wool & Camel's Hair

Of Rabbits Wool & Camels HairOkay lets go back a few years... alright..dont get snippy..so it is more than just a few years.. sheesh.. Well we have to begin somewhere and since blogs are freeform textual expression, I will be jumping around all over the place. I don't do dates well, and I never carry a palm pilot or diary. So you will have to excuse me if I make a time machine jump back into the deep dark past when my second children's book was published. I was in the midst of a roll. I had finished my first book for children, "The Letter & The Crown" and now they wanted another. I went shopping though, for another publisher, and soon United Synagogue gave an offer, and thus the second, (and last book to be published..sighs) in the Grandfather Owl Series was born, put together and published. They still sell it at Amazon and other such esoteric places! It was fun doing it and writing it. It would be the last children's book of mine to see the light of day in publishing, and I have since stopped doing that genre. Though I will admit from time to time I get a burning urge to return to it. Of Rabbit's Wool & Camel's Hair is the second book published in the Grandfather Owl Series. Originally published by the United Synagogue, it was the second in the Grandfather Owl series. It is fully illustrated in color, with original pictures by Diane Liff on every page. This book deals with the biblical story of the tree and the serpent that tempted Adam & Eve, and their expulsion from Eden. It is a difficult story to tell children but this book succeeds in its endeavor. When released originally in 1989 it was highly praised, and won two awards in Israel. The story also tells of the legendary Phoenix, one of the major protagonists in the book and in the Garden of Eden. And lays the foundation for the stories to come.

Of Rabbit's Wool & Camel's Hair is for children between the ages of 5-11 and for adults too!


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